Just want to get an opinion on a song i wrote?

Nice lyrics. But I feel as if theres something missing. It seems like your theme here is an upcoming danger, and thats probably whats puzzling. The lyrics seems incomplete, as if you are only building up to a climax. Try and make it focus on something instead of being vague. Like what kind of danger lurks ahead? What will happen when it comes? maybe try putting a storyline behind it as well.